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[Hase]

The Bridge

 

Sun sets behind the bridge
And with it another day
Loses itself in a colourful sky

 

All one day
Of smiles and tears and hugs
Comes to an end

 

Ducks say Good Night
On the nearby river
That I have walked along since I can think

Biking in summer
Cold hands in autumn
Looking for snow in winter
Greeting the first sunlight and flowers in spring

Now I am standing still
Staring eastward
Ashamed of enjoying life ...

 

Sun has set behind the bridge
If only there always was a bridge
To connect what is separate

 

Pacify what rages

[Carlos]

Hallo Hase, 

 

"ashamed of enjoying life ..." 

 

Hier würde ich das Gedicht beenden lassen. 

Liebe Grüße

Carlos